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Ljudi, ovde postajte i pišite vašu poeziju. Možda nije najkvalitetnija, ali je vaša i odraz je vaših osjećaja i razmišljanja.
Langel- Under the bridge downtown
- Number of posts : 58
Location : jungle
Registration date : 2008-05-31
Re: Poetry
Hehe da probam ja
Jump`n`Jam all
I jam my door from all world
I jam my door i want to be alone
With that door i jam a lie
Cause in that world i feel like a spy
I stay here to make i true free
Stay alone but not complete
sooooooo i want to jam more
sooooooo i want to stay alone
sooooooo long as must to be alone
To make a true, not a fake woooorld
Sooooooo jamp and jam all,
Jam lie, jam fear, jam hate,
Jam your drum, brake all tham FAKE !!
Dok sam pisao ovu pesmu ... onako sam mashtao da je pishem za Pepperse :loudlaff:
i da je seche neki predivan Johnov solo !!!
Naravno ima i poruku i znachenje za mene.
Jump`n`Jam all
I jam my door from all world
I jam my door i want to be alone
With that door i jam a lie
Cause in that world i feel like a spy
I stay here to make i true free
Stay alone but not complete
sooooooo i want to jam more
sooooooo i want to stay alone
sooooooo long as must to be alone
To make a true, not a fake woooorld
Sooooooo jamp and jam all,
Jam lie, jam fear, jam hate,
Jam your drum, brake all tham FAKE !!
Dok sam pisao ovu pesmu ... onako sam mashtao da je pishem za Pepperse :loudlaff:
i da je seche neki predivan Johnov solo !!!
Naravno ima i poruku i znachenje za mene.
Re: Poetry
Svidja mi se Charlie,ja je zamisljam kao skakutavuu i leprsavu(((:
Ja nisam talentovana za pisanje,ali volela bih da vidim druge,bez stida(((:
Ja nisam talentovana za pisanje,ali volela bih da vidim druge,bez stida(((:
jecawaste- Under the bridge downtown
- Number of posts : 48
Age : 32
Registration date : 2008-05-30
Re: Poetry
uce li nas da je danas proslost, sadasnjost i buducnost?
ili da ne mozemo nista da promenimo..
da verujemo u sudbinu, koja ne veruje u nas
i grohotom se smeje.
jer mi smo juce, danas i sutra.
a sudbina odavno nema planove za nas.
suplji smo i prazni, dragi moj, najdrazi zivote.
ljubavi moja!
ili da ne mozemo nista da promenimo..
da verujemo u sudbinu, koja ne veruje u nas
i grohotom se smeje.
jer mi smo juce, danas i sutra.
a sudbina odavno nema planove za nas.
suplji smo i prazni, dragi moj, najdrazi zivote.
ljubavi moja!
kokica- Step from the road to the sea to the sky
- Number of posts : 110
Age : 40
Location : oz
Registration date : 2008-05-26
Re: Poetry
With that door i jam a lie
Cause in that world i feel like a spy
Jam your drum, brake all tham FAKE !!
meni se mnogo dopada ova recenica...
svidja mi se :kisskiss:
kokica- Step from the road to the sea to the sky
- Number of posts : 110
Age : 40
Location : oz
Registration date : 2008-05-26
Re: Poetry
Step here tell me where
the playground is gone
where dreams have been collapsed
Here,theres no place
I can enyoin myself
Id like to hear
that Im wrong
Nowhere
you can be allone
without all that problems
Here,theres no place
I can enyoin myself
Id like to hear
that Im wrong
Sometimes i got a feel
that succes you
have to buy
and that my wishes are inpossible
Here,theres no place
I can enyoin myself
Id like to hear
that Im wrong
inace je još nesto islo na kraju al se nemogu sjetiti...nema veze ;)
inace sam ovo napisala negdje pred 5 mjeseci vise-manje kada sam se svAdala s roditeljima oko sviranja gitare,i kada su bili protiv elektricne...pa me to ubijalo u pojam,ali sam dobila bitku hhhhh :loudlaff: (kupila sam si ju a oni su ostali nezadovoljni =)
:funky:
Krokodil- The wave you can't stop
- Number of posts : 380
Age : 30
Location : Vukojebina
Registration date : 2008-05-22
Re: Poetry
hm.. nakon kaj si kupila gitaru, jesi uglazbila pjesmu? mislim..dinamični su stihovi totalno bi se dalo, i čak bi bilo po malo funky :peaceman: ili ne, ovaj.. kako ti želiš :-)
ali totalno bi to trebala pretvoriti u pravu pjesmu
ali totalno bi to trebala pretvoriti u pravu pjesmu
Re: Poetry
eee...nisam uglazbila pjesmu,neznam teoriju glazbe bas i ono,neznam kako da spojim gitaru i pjevanje,ali svakih tolko si zapisem neki tab (nazovimo note za gitaru) mali dio pa mozda nesto izvucem =)
tnx..sad ste me zainteresirali,...heheheh :yeah:
tnx..sad ste me zainteresirali,...heheheh :yeah:
Krokodil- The wave you can't stop
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Age : 30
Location : Vukojebina
Registration date : 2008-05-22
Re: Poetry
eee,samo spojimo :loudlaff:
Krokodil- The wave you can't stop
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Age : 30
Location : Vukojebina
Registration date : 2008-05-22
Re: Poetry
Evo odlučila sam obajviti nekoliko svojih pjesmica.
Napisane su u raznim situacijama(pod satom,navečer kad nisam mogla zaspati,...)
Pa,sami procijenite:
×Prijateljica×
Sjedim...
Sama sam usred šume!
Slušam zvukove.Razmišljam...
Samo se jedna riječ
stalno vrti po mojoj glavi!!!
Pitam se ZAŠTO?!
Zašto me ostavila,
kad sam bila najtužnija?!
Zašto me nije slušala,
dok sam je molila da mi pomogne?!
Ustala je,pogledala me i...Otišla.
Otišla bez pozdrava...
Plakala sma znajući da
sam tu osobu jučer nazivala
NAJBOLJOM PRIJATELJICOM!!
--> napisano: 07.svibnja.2007 <--
sad je stvarno kasno...tako da ću ostale obajviti sutra....
još moram eng.ponovit za sutra(kontrolna)držite mi fige!!!
Cmox svima ;-))
Napisane su u raznim situacijama(pod satom,navečer kad nisam mogla zaspati,...)
Pa,sami procijenite:
×Prijateljica×
Sjedim...
Sama sam usred šume!
Slušam zvukove.Razmišljam...
Samo se jedna riječ
stalno vrti po mojoj glavi!!!
Pitam se ZAŠTO?!
Zašto me ostavila,
kad sam bila najtužnija?!
Zašto me nije slušala,
dok sam je molila da mi pomogne?!
Ustala je,pogledala me i...Otišla.
Otišla bez pozdrava...
Plakala sma znajući da
sam tu osobu jučer nazivala
NAJBOLJOM PRIJATELJICOM!!
--> napisano: 07.svibnja.2007 <--
sad je stvarno kasno...tako da ću ostale obajviti sutra....
još moram eng.ponovit za sutra(kontrolna)držite mi fige!!!
Cmox svima ;-))
Re: Poetry
Život
mehanizam za mazohiste
razočaranje za optimiste
iznenađenje za potonule
Ljudi
izgubljeni pod svodom
sa svih strana lažna svjetla
svjetionici koji iščeznu na dodir
Život
subjektivnost pogleda
nemogućnost razuma
prevara osjetila
Ljudi
marionete i lutkari istodobno
pijuni u vlastitoj igri
biologija emocija
Život
sizifov posao
romantičarska zanesenost ili
racionalistička hrabrost
Ljudi
gospodari i sluge vlastitog sebe
perfektna nesavršenost
snaga i slabost
Život
stvarnost koja je neopisiva
uzvišenost nad prosječnosti
igra svjetla i sjene
Ljudi
sretni i nesretni
raspored gena
heraklovo raskršće
Život
samo muzika
mehanizam za mazohiste
razočaranje za optimiste
iznenađenje za potonule
Ljudi
izgubljeni pod svodom
sa svih strana lažna svjetla
svjetionici koji iščeznu na dodir
Život
subjektivnost pogleda
nemogućnost razuma
prevara osjetila
Ljudi
marionete i lutkari istodobno
pijuni u vlastitoj igri
biologija emocija
Život
sizifov posao
romantičarska zanesenost ili
racionalistička hrabrost
Ljudi
gospodari i sluge vlastitog sebe
perfektna nesavršenost
snaga i slabost
Život
stvarnost koja je neopisiva
uzvišenost nad prosječnosti
igra svjetla i sjene
Ljudi
sretni i nesretni
raspored gena
heraklovo raskršće
Život
samo muzika
Langel- Under the bridge downtown
- Number of posts : 58
Location : jungle
Registration date : 2008-05-31
Re: Poetry
Langel:super pjesma :cheers: samo neznam zasto ja bi ju radije na
engleskom,i onda bi mogla zamisliti kao bi zvucala :music:
a chili4ever: joj,gadna situacija,kuzim tocno taj osjecaj kad se tako razocaras
engleskom,i onda bi mogla zamisliti kao bi zvucala :music:
a chili4ever: joj,gadna situacija,kuzim tocno taj osjecaj kad se tako razocaras
Krokodil- The wave you can't stop
- Number of posts : 380
Age : 30
Location : Vukojebina
Registration date : 2008-05-22
Re: Poetry
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..I whispered your name tonight ...
( name written on my heart )
and I became night ...
I beged you not to close window of your room ..
˝please don´t, You will not feel coldness ... ˝
I will hug You so softly that You will feel soft wind caressing Your body ...
I will look at You all night , smilling ...
my eyes will discover You with warm rain of glances ...
my heart played song of love , I wanted to reach Your lips ,
I wanted to taste softness of its poison ,
I wanted we have night with storm of passion ...
but I was scared to wake You ...
I loved You silently ,
as angel shivering feeling Your breath ,
hearing nothing but beats of our hearts...
it was melody of pure love ...
I need to leave before sun catch me ...
I reached to your face and whispered
>> I love You << and disappeard in magical darkness ...
..I whispered your name tonight ...
( name written on my heart )
and I became night ...
I beged you not to close window of your room ..
˝please don´t, You will not feel coldness ... ˝
I will hug You so softly that You will feel soft wind caressing Your body ...
I will look at You all night , smilling ...
my eyes will discover You with warm rain of glances ...
my heart played song of love , I wanted to reach Your lips ,
I wanted to taste softness of its poison ,
I wanted we have night with storm of passion ...
but I was scared to wake You ...
I loved You silently ,
as angel shivering feeling Your breath ,
hearing nothing but beats of our hearts...
it was melody of pure love ...
I need to leave before sun catch me ...
I reached to your face and whispered
>> I love You << and disappeard in magical darkness ...
Hells_angel- Under the bridge downtown
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Registration date : 2008-06-02
Re: Poetry
danke :D
Langel- Under the bridge downtown
- Number of posts : 58
Location : jungle
Registration date : 2008-05-31
Re: Poetry
super su vam pjesme
a evo moja...malo više onak....bila sam 5. razred kad sam ju napisala i uèiteljica je slala na natjeèaj pa je bila i objavljena... :P
evo linkiæ...(pisana je na kajkavskom narjeèju,pa ak ima koja nepoznata rijeè,slobodno pitajte :P)
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i love all of you... :cheers: :cheers:
a evo moja...malo više onak....bila sam 5. razred kad sam ju napisala i uèiteljica je slala na natjeèaj pa je bila i objavljena... :P
evo linkiæ...(pisana je na kajkavskom narjeèju,pa ak ima koja nepoznata rijeè,slobodno pitajte :P)
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i love all of you... :cheers: :cheers:
peppersovka- I am what I am Most motherfuckers Don't give a damn
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Age : 31
Location : Krapina
Registration date : 2008-05-24
Re: Poetry
There's a game I play every day
Called pretending everything's OK
I'm usually good at it
but now I'm so scared
GAME OVER might apear
before you realise I cared
Called pretending everything's OK
I'm usually good at it
but now I'm so scared
GAME OVER might apear
before you realise I cared
Re: Poetry
andy...
odlicno
odlicno
kokica- Step from the road to the sea to the sky
- Number of posts : 110
Age : 40
Location : oz
Registration date : 2008-05-26
Re: Poetry
strava su vam pesme!!! :kisskiss:
evo je jedna moja jos nedovrsena
one too many a day,
too hard to leave,
too painful to stay,
too painful to stop
too hard to move on,
too hard with you
too painful alone
one too many a day
too much for me
well, have it your way.
yes, i love you but that's not what i'll say,
so just go and have it your way
evo je jedna moja jos nedovrsena
one too many a day,
too hard to leave,
too painful to stay,
too painful to stop
too hard to move on,
too hard with you
too painful alone
one too many a day
too much for me
well, have it your way.
yes, i love you but that's not what i'll say,
so just go and have it your way
paprichitza- I am what I am Most motherfuckers Don't give a damn
- Number of posts : 1658
Age : 28
Location : somewhere. everywhere, anywhere...just as long as chilies are with me
Registration date : 2008-09-11
Re: Poetry
hvala
paprichitza- I am what I am Most motherfuckers Don't give a damn
- Number of posts : 1658
Age : 28
Location : somewhere. everywhere, anywhere...just as long as chilies are with me
Registration date : 2008-09-11
Re: Poetry
PAPRICHITZA stvarno super...sviða mi se...i sve ostalO od svih ostalih su mi bas super....svaka ima nesto svoje,na svoj nacin...
...ja bas i nisam nesto super za poeziOM(osim kad sam ljuta da bi nekog mogla :kar: ...e to je moje vrijeme za pisati takvo sto..)..ja sam vise za pisati prozu...to mi nekako bolje ide..
...AL OBOZAVAM CITATI SVE STO SE TU NAPISE JER MI JE BAS LIJEPO....TAKO DA SAMO TAKO NASTAVITE...=)
...ja bas i nisam nesto super za poeziOM(osim kad sam ljuta da bi nekog mogla :kar: ...e to je moje vrijeme za pisati takvo sto..)..ja sam vise za pisati prozu...to mi nekako bolje ide..
...AL OBOZAVAM CITATI SVE STO SE TU NAPISE JER MI JE BAS LIJEPO....TAKO DA SAMO TAKO NASTAVITE...=)
chili_tapper- I am what I am Most motherfuckers Don't give a damn
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Age : 29
Location : my_rhcp_world_hehe
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Re: Poetry
hvala...
i ja pisem samo kad sam jako besna ili jako tuzna.
samo se uvek razoracaram kad citam svoje stare pesme, jer mi posle nekog vremena sve deluju bezveze...
i ja pisem samo kad sam jako besna ili jako tuzna.
samo se uvek razoracaram kad citam svoje stare pesme, jer mi posle nekog vremena sve deluju bezveze...
paprichitza- I am what I am Most motherfuckers Don't give a damn
- Number of posts : 1658
Age : 28
Location : somewhere. everywhere, anywhere...just as long as chilies are with me
Registration date : 2008-09-11
Re: Poetry
evo i ja sam imala nekakav sugav dan...pa mi je doslo...inace...moje sve cesto imaju neku rimu...tako da...hehe....trudila sam se da se poklapaju rijeci i da ima tema veze samnom...mislila sam da necu uspjeti ali sad kada citam vidim da ima ono nesto moje...
i da...engleski je tak-tak ima nekih greskica ali cemo reci da je to pjesnicka sloboda...
...oh,it's so confusing
i know,maybe it's strange,funny or amusing
It's like:
I'm watchin' a very strange story on TV
hmmm...one girl..she really looks to me!
I can see her,she's standing
standing on her own
but in the same time
her eyes are screaming:
Help, I'm watching a crime!
Run girl!
You should run fast!
Leave this place,leave it now!
But,still,I'm not moving..I don't know how
Now,she is screaming
but I can't hear the voice
Girl,you should make your own choice
Run away or stay and see
Think fast,and remember
You're not the only one
If you stay i must stay,too
If you run away,I'll be just behind you
You will stay..Is that true?
Oh,yeah my dreams come true
I'm so happy
I'll see a perfact crime
Me,my twin,just us
in the same place, in the same time!
eto...moja freaky pjesmica....ja je se malo bojim...al ju i volim..(opet ja sa svojom rimom,ali je ovaj put bila slucajno)..bas mi je nekako draga...
i da...engleski je tak-tak ima nekih greskica ali cemo reci da je to pjesnicka sloboda...
...oh,it's so confusing
i know,maybe it's strange,funny or amusing
It's like:
I'm watchin' a very strange story on TV
hmmm...one girl..she really looks to me!
I can see her,she's standing
standing on her own
but in the same time
her eyes are screaming:
Help, I'm watching a crime!
Run girl!
You should run fast!
Leave this place,leave it now!
But,still,I'm not moving..I don't know how
Now,she is screaming
but I can't hear the voice
Girl,you should make your own choice
Run away or stay and see
Think fast,and remember
You're not the only one
If you stay i must stay,too
If you run away,I'll be just behind you
You will stay..Is that true?
Oh,yeah my dreams come true
I'm so happy
I'll see a perfact crime
Me,my twin,just us
in the same place, in the same time!
eto...moja freaky pjesmica....ja je se malo bojim...al ju i volim..(opet ja sa svojom rimom,ali je ovaj put bila slucajno)..bas mi je nekako draga...
chili_tapper- I am what I am Most motherfuckers Don't give a damn
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Age : 29
Location : my_rhcp_world_hehe
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Re: Poetry
If you stay i must stay,too
If you run away,I'll be just behind you
odlichna je i nije mi tako strashna ...
If you run away,I'll be just behind you
odlichna je i nije mi tako strashna ...
Re: Poetry
Evo jedna pjesma moja,ima gramatičkih greška radi rime al nea veze,meni se sviđa (:
Sometimes I sing the song
about my first love
Sometimes I sing the song
about flying in the sky
Sometimes I sing the song
about one beautiful place
but I always sing a song
about stars and her name is
RED HOT CHILI PEPPERS!!!
bTW: chili_tapper -> odlična pjesmaa...
:treeswing:
Sometimes I sing the song
about my first love
Sometimes I sing the song
about flying in the sky
Sometimes I sing the song
about one beautiful place
but I always sing a song
about stars and her name is
RED HOT CHILI PEPPERS!!!
bTW: chili_tapper -> odlična pjesmaa...
:treeswing:
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